Zento's puppets

Name:Blood seek
Rank:B
Description:This jutsu can be used when a person is bleeding in the water and the puppet is in the water. When the blood hits he picks up the blood and can find out were they are

The puppet has no life, there's no way he can sense something or someone.

jutsu gone

Wait can it move even at land?

And remove the moves at very fast, its obviously large therefore taking a toll on its speed.

Unapproved for a while.

BlackFramedGlasses wrote:

Wait can it move even at land?

And remove the moves at very fast, its obviously large therefore taking a toll on its speed.

Unapproved for a while.

well first he's not big. He's the size of a normal shark and yes he can because puppets fly in the air.

Puppets doenst fly, only if they have wings. And Sharks are big sized,

yeah they do. crow and chiyo's puppets are in the air when fighting and moving around

They were gliding in the air not literally flying. Plus, sharks are much more larger than those puppets allowing Chiyo to lift them in the air, not fly.

Most puppets are also made ou of a lighter wood, not metal.

Take away the flying, or make the material lighter.

Even if this thing were to even get off the ground it would take a good amount of chakra, and it would move terribley slow. Fix those changes or else this puppet is UNAPROVABLE

well forget about the shark for now i have this one

Appearance: pic

Name: Grimm Reaper
Rank:A
Type:

- Offensive

Description:This puppet was a gift to Zento by the great and powerful Bob Kingwe. He has a mask on his face and a long black robe that covers the puppets hole body. This puppet is made out of wood and has some metal parts around it's arms. The puppet dose not have any other weapons on it other then it's scythe. He did not add any weapons to it because that would be saying that the puppet Bob Kingwe made was not good enough for Zento. The puppet has most of it's power in it's arms and because if it not haveing any weapons on it, this puppet is the fastest puppet Zento has ever seen. The sythe has a poison on it that is fast acting but dose not kill. What the poison dose is (after 15 posts of it being inside of you) it slows down the blood and heart rate of the persone. After the poison is done (20 posts) the persone will pass out and give off the looks of being dead until a injected with some adrenalin shot.

Weapons: Where are the weapons stored in this puppet?

- Arms scythe
- Legs
- Torso
-Head Mask made out of the strongest metal
- Other... (If any)

Jutsu: If this puppet has any special jutsu, put em' here!)

Too fast effect of the Poison. Slow it down.

done

Well considering its all fixed finally I will approve this.

UNAPPROVED

That is still too fast. Make it about 15 and 20 for the after effects. The reason is, once this takes effect you win, so this is very OP for a very fast duration.

done