Uchiha D.
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 | Subject: Messiah Prophecies {My Original Manga}  Thu 04 Nov 2010, 10:14 am | |
| HAH, i like posted this wherever i go, so here i go posting this here. Many already said that it's like naruto plot, but i swear.. it wont be. Title(s): Messiah Prophecies, False Messiah, Messiah Chronicles Artist: Uchiha D. (MY REAL NAME HERE!) Genre: Im not really sure about genre's but i think its Shonen type Setting: Modern day About: - Spoiler:
In a world that ended, humanity remains, and the reason for this, is the existence of messiah.
Hundreds of centuries had past since the messiah was last seen, leaving the land in peace, the 7 kingdoms waged war upon them selves, Leonart, Lubelia, Carmel, Aida, Bevel, Lunalil and Baravia.
Amongst the 7, one prospered with the lost of others, the kingdom of Carmel.
Prophecy foretold the end of the world, will be caused by the center of the world, and within that center found is the core where Carmel's Empire Rose in power.
The Empire holds the world within the palm of there hands, and with fear of the prophecy, the world feared of the Empire. (the empire is a a massive structure found at the center of the world, ideally connected to the core, on FM map, carmel is at the center, and the center of Carmel the empire, gaah word play ><)
And so a world of Chaos was born, there was no longer a battle for land, no longer the thirst for power, Carmel, took it all, the empire owns everything.
Story:- Spoiler:
Though in general, the story is about a never ending battle for freedom against the empire and the alliance between all kingdoms, it's mostly about a boy named Fix.
He is a 15 year old boy branded as a cursed child for having white hair and crimson red eyes when he goes under the moonlight. Despite being seen as a monster, he never grew bitter of the world, he always did his best to be considered worthy of human affection.
But despite all his efforts, the only person who's shown affection towards him was his deceased Master Jack Nicholas, King of bevel, given the brand of pirate king for starting an all out rebellion against the Empire.
The beginning of the manga is the death of Jack Nicholas where Fix is shown crying over a grave he himself made. It was where he first met Jack 8 years earlier.
Meeting Jack changed his life forever, and from him, he received the happy jack pin which changes his hair color whenever he wears it, hence receiving acceptance from everyone else in the world.
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Random comments from me:- Spoiler:
I didnt originally plan the whole story for a manga, it started out as an obsession with RPG-games like final fantasy and the likes. I was so absorbed that i wanted to literally make one, and together with it a whole new world.
That's when i came up with False messiah as an RPG forum. My friend told me that it would make a really good manga plot, i went like "meh, i cant draw the same characters twice, plus i hate details."
But then again, maybe i can try. so i tried.
False messiah earlier manga attempt (RAW)
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2bjx78
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2b5vhh (semi-cleaned)
I guess you can tell i have no where to go from there. Not only can i not draw in details, i cant draw panels and proportions properly as well.
So i gave up with the manga idea and went with the RP for the longest time.
But i guess i didn't really give up, i tried again, this time starting from the very beginning of the story. (Unlike when on my first attempt, i skipped one to many chapters)
So enough about that, here are some character sketches*cheers*
Ringo (Female protagonist)
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/art/Ringo-False-Messiah-139685065
Rolo Star (Male antagonist)
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/art/Rolo-Star-140135795
Fix Elliot (Teen/ Main Character!) (Ooh! an the right eye was not left out, i just wanted to make his eye appear white and stuff, but i guess its not much of a help)
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/art/Fix-146235047
Spinny Davison AKA Sharkspin (Sky king, Jack's Pupil)
https://2img.net/h/i58.photobucket.com/albums/g275/GothikaH26/sharkspin.png
Every chapter will have 18 pages or so. (Im not really the best in drawing, and im scaaared of inking, so this are all pencil stuff, i just edited them in PS cs2) | |
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