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PostSubject: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeThu 21 Oct 2010, 1:34 pm

~General Information~

Name:
Rosalie Sansei [[ Row-suh-leeh, Sun-sayh,]]
Nickname/Alias:
Rose, Ralia [[ Ruh-leeh-ah, Ralia is stressed in the 'i'
Weight:
55 kg/ 121.25 lbs
Height:
1.75 meter/ 5 feet 7.4 inches
Age:
18
Gender:
Female
Appearance:
Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Ss_air10

Ralia is 1. 75 meters tall and weighs 55 kg. Ralia has long pink hair, which smells like roses. Her big blue eyes are always looking at others happy and never show any other emotion. Her body is slim and well formed because of the hard training she has gone through. On her left shoulder, the word 'Airi' is engraved, which she was called by from the scientists.

Clothing:
Ralia has a rather attractively dainty build. She has a pale and fair skin, which is, however, able to tan. Also, her skin is very smooth, and is soft to the touch.

Her face is smooth; sweet and elegant. Her straight hair is a light pink, forming messy bangs which cover up her forehead; though her crystal blue eyes are always visible. Her narrow eyebrows are usually hidden by the bangs, being represented by a pink hue. She has a small nose and thin lips.

Her complexion is a slender one, giving her a deceiving frail appearance. Instead of the usual headband, a black leather wristband is wrapped around her left wrist loosely, on which the Iwa symbol is carved. She wears a white T-shirt which has various stickers imprinted on it and black shorts with a black and a pink belt wrapped around it. Over the T-shirt, she wears a black-pink streaked jacked with a fluffy hood which has cat ears. Her feet are covered by high black boots and black-pink streaked socks which almost reach up to the black shorts.


Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Pinkpu10

Personality:
In General

Ralia is naturally empathetic, compassionate and quietly and very idealistically watching everything. She is a naturally skilled communicator, drawn to new ideas and future oriented and she is looking for meaning in absolutely everything and everyone. Ralia also needs to believe she has contributed something to life and is deeply concerned with harmony and maintaining harmony is very important to her. Ralia may appear at times to be aloof and cool, but she is still water run deep. She is typically attracted to the abstract and symbolic and is usually very open minded with a classless approach to people/society.

Ralia is reasonable and makes decisions with feeling and compassion focused on maintaining harmony and she will follow-through and fulfill commitments. She is usually very cooperative unless strife is constant and extreme. Furthermore, she can more easily see human potential and can quietly work to bring that about. Also, creativity is not foreign to her and she expresses it in various ways, such as poetry and drawing.

Relationships

In relationships, Ralia is usually compassionate, adaptable and sensitive. She is also very warm to her partner and she deeply values friendship once a relationship is established. Ralia values family, children, commitment, loyalty and love. In relationships, she can become in love with the 'idea' of love. Also, she has a strong idea of right and wrong; but, that may be difficult at first to see in her. In relationships, she is flexible and can become irritated with too much routine, rules, and structure and she also has a natural awareness of the joys and sufferings of others.

Under Stress

Under stress, Ralia's personality changes in many ways. She may become even less Introverted and more Extroverted, and verbally 'attack' and may bit off more than she can chew when under stress. She'll become rigid and a perfectionist, and feel very inadequate and self-critical. Ralia will become explosively critical of others under extreme stress.


Perfectionist ~If a job’s worth doing it’s worth doing well.~

When working or trying to achieve something, Ralia is quite a serious-minded person and does not readily let go of her inhibitions. She prides herself on her discipline, organization and quality control. She concentrates on doing things right and can be preoccupied with the importance of not making mistakes. She is able to spot mistakes and people can sometimes regard her as overly critical. This is particularly true when she is in a supervisory role, although she is as hard on herself as she is on others. If she commits to a task she will ensure it is done to the highest standards. She worries about doing the right thing and has a cautious nature. Ralia is prepared to work hard and may even be described as a workaholic. When she is under pressure she tends to work even harder and loses touch with her own emotional needs. She has high personal standards and high expectations of the way others should conduct themselves when on duty. She has a tendency not to delegate as she feels that no one could do the task as well as her. She is polite, and understands if someone makes a mistake but she will get angry if it seems that their mistake doesn't matter to them. As a general rule though, she doesn’t like to express anger.

Observer ~Watch and you will see what others do not see~

Ralia has a natural thirst for knowledge and learning and it is important that she achieves a depth of understanding. She enjoys research activities and people often seek her out for her opinion and expertise. Her source of power in missions is her knowledge. Ralia is not interested in the frills and trappings; she can get by as long as she has what she needs to continue thinking. She tends to observe everything and everyone and writes down her observations into a small blue notebook which she always carries with her. Ralia enjoys analyzing a person's personality and then to know how that person 'ticks'. She likes to think things through carefully before taking action.

Peacemaker ~Live and let live.~

Ralia is an excellent mediator as she is able to see all points of view. People regard her as neutral territory. She feels much more comfortable agreeing with others than disagreeing openly. People often assume she agrees with them when she doesn’t, but she usually doesn’t tell them. However, if the situation is serious and her decisions and opinion are the only ones that count, she doesn't hesitate to take them and to speak her mind.


~Clan Information~

Clan Name:
Sansei
Kekkei Genkai:
Sansei [[Acid]]
Clan Symbol:
Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Sansei10
Clan History:
Thirteen years ago a group of scientists took ten young children who had the age of five. The scientists made various experiments on the children with fluorine acid. They wanted the children to gain fluorine properties and so they were trying to add to its body that acid. However, nine children literally melted away because of the acid. However, one child in which the scientists had injected liquid silicium survived and could take out of her body fluorine acid and use it however she wished.

After five years had passed, the girl was ten and many more experiments had been done on her. These experiments had as result that she had in her body aqua regia. This substance had the ability to even completely destroy gold and platinum.

When the girl was fifteen, she was able to produce a strong acid which they called ''Magic acid.'' This acid could destroy nearly everything. The only thing that could stop it was simple glass and materials which had high silicium content in general.

[[Silicon ( Latin: silicium) is the most common metalloid. It is a chemical element, which has the symbol Si and atomic number 14. A tetravalent metalloid, silicon is less reactive than its chemical analog carbon. In the form of silica and silicates, silicon (silicium) forms useful glasses, cements, and ceramics. It is also a constituent of silicones, a class-name for various synthetic plastic substances made of silicon, oxygen, carbon and hydrogen, often confused with silicon itself. So, magic acid does destroy plastic things.]]


Ability Summary:

Fluorine acid is a corrosive liquid.

Abilities:
Fluorine acid causes minor burns which however can't be felt because of its numbing effect. It leaves unaffected only carbon, ferrum and pure elements in general.


Aqua regia (Latin:royal water) or royal water is a highly corrosive, fuming yellow or red solution, also called nitro-hydrochloric acid.

Abilities:
Aqua regia dissolves gold and platinum, though neither constituent acid will do so alone, because, in combination, each acid performs a different task. Nitric acid is a powerful oxidizer, which will actually dissolve a virtually undetectable amount of gold, forming gold ions (Au3+). The hydrochloric acid provides a ready supply of chloride ions (Cl-), which react with the gold ions to produce chloroaurate anions, also in solution. The reaction with hydrochloric acid is an equilibrium reaction which favors formation of chloroaurate anions (AuCl4-). This results in a removal of gold and platinum ions from solution and allows further oxidation of gold to take place. The gold dissolves to become chloroauric acid. Aqua regia also dissolves anything that is hydrocarbon based, leaving behind black ash.

Magic acid is a highly corrosive liquid which destroys organic and inorganic compounds, leaving behind only pure elements such as carbon, ferrum, silicium, calcium, magnesium etc. in form of black ash.

Ralia draws the acid from her body(mouth, nose, skin, etc.) and controls it with handsigns.

~Rank/Village Information~

Classification:
Jounin (Formerly Tsuchikage)
Letter Rank:
S
Village:
Konohagakure~ (Formerly Iwagakure)

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty:
Ninjutsu
Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Fire~
Lightning~
Earth~


Special Characteristics:

Agility:
Ralia has the ability to change her body's position efficiently, which requires the integration of isolated movement skills using a combination of balance, coordination, speed, reflexes, strength, endurance and stamina.

Balance:
Ralia can maintain the center of gravity of her body within the base of support with minimal postural sway. With this, she can for example, stand on a bottle with one foot without falling down.

Reflex:
Ralia has good reflexes and thus can respond involuntary and nearly instantaneously to a change in the external environment [stimulus].

Speed:
Ralia has increased her speed by training for hours everyday in the forests. Therefore, she is much faster than most Jounin.

Stamina:
Ralia can sustain prolonged stressful effort.


~History/RP Sample~

History/Background Story:

~To be born is to start the journey towards death.~


Ralia was born on a sunny Sunday morning in an insignificant little village, which had no Ninjas whatsoever. The little village was on the east-southern borders of the Land of Fire. During it's lifetime, it never got involved in political affairs or wars, nor was it ever conquered by any land. It was always on it's own and enjoyed the benefits of freedom.

Ralia grew up in this peaceful little village, spending there her happiest childhood memories. Her everyday life included some standards until the age of five. Her parents taught her how to speak and walk in a considerably early age, which would benefit her in her later life. They also saw that she was talented in reading, understanding and solving different problems, so her parents were teaching her grammar, vocabulary and mathematics in her very early years. Ralia also enjoyed drawing and mostly writing down everything new she noticed into a little notebook, which was a gift from her parents. From a young age, one could see that this little girl was exceptionally skilled in interpersonal relationships. In general, Ralia was a happy five year old child, who looked like she was going to spend her life peacefully. Little did she know about the misfortune that was awaiting her.


~The nightmare begins.~


Ralia, being five years old, had completely mastered the arts of reading, writing and solving logically problems. One day, Ralia was in her room reading a book, when she heard the crashing of a bowl from the kitchen. She knew that her mother was there and was worried about the unusual noise. The girl walked into the kitchen and saw her mother lying on the floor, not dead, but unconscious. Ralia quickly kneeled next to her mother, calling out to her, shaking her shoulder in order for her mother to wake up. This action was interrupted by a mysterious man, who sneaked up behind the young girl and put a wet tissue over her nose and mouth, which caused her to fall asleep. The man kidnapped her and brought her to the fire country, near Iwa.

~Love is friendship set on fire.~


The mysterious man appeared to be a scientist. He, together with five other people, put Ralia in a cell with other children. Periodically, the cell door would open and a child would be taken away, destined never to return The remaining children were treated somewhat normal until they were taken away, too. Inside the cell, Ralia had made many friends, but the closest one was a boy her age, called Nasushiro Tokashoni. He had bright red hair, which Ralia loved messing with, and ocean blue eyes. They got along quite well and shared most of the happy moments Ralia can remember.

Most of the kids were all gone, only Ralia, Nasushiro and three other children being left. The door opened, making the all too familiar crack noise it always did when it was being opened. A middle aged man with brown, short hair and round glasses walked in, and approached Ralia and Nasushiro. He grabbed Ralia's arm and was going to take her with him but Nasushiro pushed the man's hand away and offered himself to be taken away instead of Ralia. The scientist didn't seem to have a problem, as the girl and the boy were almost the same, body structure-wise. Nasushiro took the man's hand and before leaving the cell he turned around, smiling at Ralia ''I'll be fine.'' he said and smiled widely, with that smile Ralia loved so much. As the door was closing, Ralia ran towards it, tears in her eyes, screaming the boys name. But the boy was gone, and she knew that she wouldn't see him again. Or would she...?


~Without pain, she can't get anywhere.~


After this incident some weeks had passed and Ralia was finally chosen to play the experiment. The scientists led her into a large white room and gave her a transparent liquid to drink which had a bitter taste. The poor girl drank it and after some minutes she was feeling dizzy and then fell unconscious. The scientists bound her to a table and started talking weird stuff, which Ralia couldn't hear anyway. Then they took out some needles and started piercing the girl's skin, filling her body with acid but at the same time with silicium. After some hours passed they placed her in a room, on a warm bed. Ralia was still sleeping because of the liquid she had drunk earlier. It looked like the operation was successful, otherwise the scientists wouldn't have kept her.

The girl suddenly woke up and found herself in the nice room. She didn't know what was going on and thus she started panicking; after all, she was just five. A Scientist entered the room and told her to calm down and that she would be treated good. And he didn't lie to her. All the Scientists were very nice to Ralia and did her every favour she wanted. In return though, they expected her not to resist when they were going to conduct knew experiments on her and to train every day with them.


After five years had passed, Ralia was ten, she had undergone many experiments which increased her powers. She was able to fully control the fluorine acid, and now she could control an acid which was called 'Aqua regia'. The girl cared little about the scientists but one. There was a scientist, who she had always liked; his name was Kiyoshi. He was a young man, in his early twenties, and he was always trying to protect her from the other scientists. He had never liked the idea of experimenting on human beings but he had no other choice since with the payment he received he could maintain his parents. His payment depended on Ralia's development and as soon as she found out about that, the girl started training harder so Kiyoshi's family could live more comfortable.

~She was free the moment she wished to be.~


Ralia was now fifteen and officially a teenager. She was pretty satisfied with her life, as through her suffering other people didn't have to be experiments and suffer instead. Or so she thought. Ralia was on the training grounds, as always, honing her skills when she overheard a conversation from two employees. They were talking about her and did not realize that she was standing behind them, as a result Ralia could hear everything. They were discussing something which Kiyoshi and the head scientist had argued about. The head scientist wanted to use Ralia as a weapon to destroy the five great villages, but Kiyoshi's opinion was that she had gone through too much suffering and that they couldn't do this to her. When Ralia heard those words from the employees, she was furious and upset at the same time. The anger conquered her other emotions and immediately she ran into the head scientist's office, and killed him with her acid. Then she quickly ran out and left the laboratory.

Ralia was running, running away from that bitter place, until she collapsed in front of a gate. Some people came and picked her up, bringing her into the hospital. There she rested for two days and the she woke up. A tall man was standing above her, staring down at her. Ralia didn't know this man, but it turned out that he was the Tsuchikage, and that she was in Iwa. The Kage offered her to stay in Iwa as a ninja after he had heard her story. The girl accepted and was made Jounin immediately.

~She was born in darkness but she will make her own light.~


The time had come to choose a new Kage, when Ralia was just 19. She was curious to find out who was going to be the Kage. The old Tsuchikage appeared before all the Shinobi and held a speech about how important the role of the Kage was. Then out of the blue he announced that Ralia Sansei would be his successor. She couldn't believe it. Still after a week of her reign, she thought that it was a dream.

Roleplay Sample:
Natsu couldn't sleep and therefore was walking on the streets of Iwagakure, all night long. No one was outside. Well, everyone was obviously sleeping. The young girl sat on a rock and looked at the night sky. The stars were shining especially bright that night. Suddenly, some birds flew above her head, probably towards their home. Natsu quickly grabbed a small, but still heavy, stone and aimed at one bird. The stone hit the bird's head, killing it instantaneously. It fell quietly some meters away from her on the ground. Natsu walked to the dead bird, pulling out a kunai. She kneeled down and started cutting the bird until she had taken out all its internal organs. She enjoyed doing things like that, she loved the scent of blood. It was infatuating, as she would say.

Natsu threw away the dead body and licked the blood from her fingers. Then she dived her hands into a nearby river, cleaning them from the dried blood. She licked her lips and walked into the city.


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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeFri 22 Oct 2010, 5:28 pm

Non-Elemental Ninjutsu


E/D Rank Jutsu

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None.
Description: This technique must be mastered by any ninja who has graduated from the shinobi academy. It's the most basic technique a Genin must know, since it can be a real lifesaver. This ninjutsu creates a simple illusion clone identical to the caster. The clone however has no physical properties and will disperse the moment it is touched.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description:
Description: Henge is the basic skill a ninja must know to become a Genin. It's mostly used as a decoy, to confuse the opponent by transforming into somebody that's an ally with the enemy, and then attack from the back when he's not expecting it. This technique can easily be combined with other jutsu for a more powerful effect, such as with Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique].

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Kawarimi is a widely used and very famous skill among shinobi. The user taps into their chakra and exchanges places with an object of similar weight and size. This is clearly an evasion technique used to dodge attacks; however it can be linked with other jutsu or attacks to create massive damage if done properly.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank:E
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: This jutsu gives you the ability to easily free yourself from a rope or any other object made from something similar to a rope. This Jutsu works merely by inserting chakra into the rope, and requires no hand seals.

C-Rank Jutsu

Name: Jibaku Fuda: Kassei
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Utilizing chakra, a ninja is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag. This can also be used to deactivate any explosive tags in the vicinity of the user, which were set to explode by means other than through the use of Jutsu.


Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Through one handseal, the user will be able to disappear from their previous position and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use, though they must travel more than 2 miles, and know exactly where they are going. This jutsu is only to be used outside of a battle, or to leave a thread entirely. This jutsu is only to be used outside of a battle, meaning you can't start a battle with it either. Also, the user is merely travelling quickly, not teleporting, so it can't be used to escape when they are tied up or locked up.

Name: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu
Rank: A
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: This jutsu renders the user invisible to the naked eye, and can deplete their smell. However, special bloodline techniques or abilities are able to detect the user performing this Jutsu.


Katon (Fire)


C Rank Jutsu

Name: Katon: Endan
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows the user to emit a jet of fire from his mouth

Name: Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements:None
Description: Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kuna

Name: Katon: Ryuuka no Jutsu
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon: Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target

B Rank Jutsu

Name: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
.
Name: Katon • Haisekishou
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon: Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when the user clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion

Name:Katon • Karyuu Endan
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.

Name: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.

Name: Katon: Hiuchi Yagura
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: A fire source.
Description: After having formed the necessary finger sign, the user can emerge from a small fire source large flames. He can create, for example, with his little lighter a huge wall of fire

Name: Katon: Karu Endan
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon: Karyu end stop is a fire Jutsu. The user spews a jet of fire, that takes the shape of a dragon, on the opponent

Name: Katon: Zukokku
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon: Zukokku is a destructive fire Jutsu. The user fires a huge fireball at the enemy.

Name: Katon: Dai Endan
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon: Dai Endan is the stronger version of Katon: Endan. The user fires a large flame from the mouth.

Name: Katon: Goenka
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon: Goenka is a fire-Jutsu. The user jumps and, while in the air, fires three huge balls of fire on the enemy.

A Rank Jutsu

Name: Katon: Goenkyou
Rank: A
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon: Gōenkyū is a larger form of the Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu. The user spits a large spherical flame at the enemy. This comes in contact with the enemy and then goes up in a huge explosion.

• Name:Ho Bunshin no Jutsu [Fire Clone Technique]
• Rank: C
• Classification: Ninjutsu.
• Element Katon
• Requirements: None.
• Description:This is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes fire to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Ho Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out attacks on its target. Also, elemental clones can think and the concentration for their jutsu needs to be maintained by the user. When this clone disperses, it reverts into an eruption of flames.

• Name:Katon: Kasai no Ame [Fire Release: Rain of Fire Technique]
• Rank: C
• Classification: Ninjutsu
• Element Katon
• Requirements: None
• Description:This is a jutsu utilizing the fire element. The user performs a few seals and begins concentrating chakra into his hands. Eventually he will manipulate it into a ball of fire completely surrounding both hands, and then fired into the air. The two fireballs will collide and then split into 15 separate fireballs which will proceed to rain down on the area as commanded by the user.

• Name: Waiya
• Rank: D
• Classification: Ninjutsu
• Element Katon
• Requirements: Rope/Wire
• Description:The user sends a small stream of fire along a length of cord or other similar object.

• Name: Fire wheel
• Rank: B
• Classification: Ninjutsu
• Element Katon
• Requirements: None.
• Description:Having finished the required handseals, the user directs his chakra with a kick. As a result, a wheel of fire is created and darts across the terrain towards the opponent at great speed.


Raiton (Lightning)


C Rank Jutsu

Name: Raiton: Kage Bunshin
Rank:C
Classification:Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements: None
Description: With Raiton: Kage Bunshin the user creates a shadow clone which is charged with Lightning chakra. It is therefore like a normal shadow clone but it’s not only a visual copy, but can it move. When the clone is destroyed, the attacker is shocked with lightning and thus paralyzed.

B Rank Jutsu

Name: Raiton: Shichou Shibari
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements: None
Description: Raiton: Shichū Shibari is a lightning Ninjutsu. With this Jutsu the user invokes four huge pillars that are placed at the opponent. Then, the opponent is tormented by electric shocks.
Note: This Jutsu can be used only by ANBU.

Name:Raiton: Gian
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements: None
Description: Raiton: Gian is a destructive lightning-Jutsu. The user concentates chakra into his mouth and converts it into electricity, which he shoots in the form of a large lightning on his opponents.

Name: Raiton: Hiraishin
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements: None
Description: Raiton: Hiraishin is a Jutsu in which the user must touch the opponent. The user extends his hand in the air and lightning strike in his body, which he passes on to the enemy, but the user remains unharmed.

S Rank Jutsu

Name: Raiton no Yoroi
Rank: S
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements: None
Description: Raiton no Yoroi is a lightning Jutsu, which consumes a lot of chakra. The user envelops himself in lightning chakra, creating a protective coating of electric energy, extremely weakening or completely neutralizing the opponent's Jutsu and strengthens the user’s Taijutsu and speed dramatically. The higher the Chakra usage is for this Jutsu is, the more lightning it builds up to the user around. Even chidori can only put a small scratch on the user.

Name: Thunder Saber
Rank: S
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements:None
Description: Thunder Saber is a technique that produces a lightning bolt in the user’s hand, which, when it comes into contact with the enemy, explodes. The explosion's range is a half meter and the saber is thrown so the user doesn't get affected by it. The hand with which it is thrown is useless for 1 post.

Doton (Earth)


E/D Rank Jutsu

Name: Doton: Shinju Zanshu no Jutsu.
Rank: D
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Doton: Shinjū Zanshu no Jutsu is a Jutsu, which serves to surprise the enemy and is especially good for getting Genin. Actually, this art has been invented in order to decapitate the enemy or torture him. The user is under the enemy in the ground. With a quick motion he grabs the opponent with the hand on the foot and pulls him so far into the ground until only the head is visible.

C Rank Jutsu

Name:Doton: Earth Clone
Rank:C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements:None
Description: The technique of the earth clone, technique that still has no name. With this technique, the user creates a clone of Earth.

Name: Doton: Dochou Eigyo
Rank:C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Doton: Dochu Eigyo no Jutsu is a n Earth-Jutsu. The user goes underground and hides there.

Name: Doton: Doroku Gaeshi
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Doton: Doroku Gaeshi is an Earth Jutsu. After the user strikes with both hands the ground, a protective earthen wall rises before him.

Name: Doton: Dochuosenko
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: Doton: Dochūsenkō is a technique with which the user can hide under the ground and move.

Name: Doton: Doryouson
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: Doton: Doryūson is an Earth Jutsu. After the user has formed the necessary finger signs, earth spears get out of the ground and pierce the enemy.

Name: Doton: Retsudo Tensho
Rank:C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Doton: Retsudo Tensho is an Earth Jutsu, which is used by Iwa Ninja. After the necessary finger signs were formed, the user puts his hand on the ground. Then the ground splits. (Like Sakura when she's hitting the earth with her fists)

B Rank Jutsu

Name: Ninpo: Iwa Nadare
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: A mountain.
Description: Ninpo: Iwa Nadare is a technique of Raiga Kurosuki. After having formed the necessary finger sign, rocks break away from a mountain and fall on the opponent.

Name: Akatsuchi’s Golem Jutsu
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: The user spews a Rock-Golem from his mouth. This golem then thrusts on the opponent and pulls out with brute force the enemy’s limbs, or it bites with the mouth out pieces of the enemy’s body.

Name: Kurotsuchi’s Earth dome.
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Kurotsuchi’s Earth dome is a defensive technique. The user creates a half Earth dome, which protects him from attacks or falling objects.

Name: Kekkai Doton: Domu Doru
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Kekkai Doton: Domu Doro is a Earth Jutsu. After the user has struck with both hands on the floor, an earth dome is built around the opponent(s) that imprisons him. The captured enemy’s chakra is sucked out by the user. If the enemies try to destroy the earth dome, the inflicted damage is being repaired instantaneously by the user. Furthermore, because of the constant chakra loss, the enemy can not use many Jutsu. However, the repair rate at the farthest away point from the user, is slowlier and thus the enemy can escape if he launches many attacks at this point.

Name: Doton: Domu
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Doton: Domu is a Jutsu, which allows the user to harden his own skin by allowing chakra to flow all over his body. After the user has formed the necessary finger sign, his skin is turns dark and his body is harder than stone. Because of this, and the increasing weight of the body of the user, the user's Taijutsu is more effective. However, its speed is suffering from his new strength. Since the lightning element is stronger than the earth element, one can break this protection with a lightning Jutsu.

Name: Doton: Doryou Dango
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description:
Doton: Doryō Dango is an Earth Jutsu, in which the user pulls a huge chunk of earth out of the ground and then throws it at the enemy.

Name:Doton: Doryu Heki
Rank:B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None.
Description: Doton: Doryu Heki is a technique with which, after having formed the corresponding finger sign, a wall can rises from soil that protects against enemy attacks.

Name: Doton: Doryu Joheki
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Doton: Doryū Jōheki is an earth Jutsu, in which a Shinobi leads Chakra into the earth and a mountain or a small mound is created. With this Jutsu, it is also possible to transform the surrounding earth.

Name: Doton: Doryu Taiga
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Doton: Doryū Taiga is an Earth Jutsu, which, creates under the feet of the enemy a mud flow, making the enemy slip and is being entrained.

Name: Doton: Doryoudan
Rank:B
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Doryūdan is a jutsu in which, after the user has formed the necessary finger sign, a dragon head is formed made of mud. This dragon head fires balls of earth on the opponent.

Name: Doton: Ganchuorou
Rank: B
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu is an Earth Jutsu, with which columns from the ground arise around a given area. The distances between the columns can be so small that the enemy should no longer be able to move, provided it is in the affected area.

Name: Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu
Rank: B
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu is an earth Jutsu, in which the user formally merges with rocks. Thus it is similar to the Meisai Gakure no Jutsu, it makes the user almost invisible to the enemy. Thus, the user is able to escape enemy attacks or sneak unnoticed onto his opponent.

Name: Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi
Rank: B
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi is an Earth Jutsu in which the user is in a cave or something similar. Then he lets the ceiling collapse and it crushes the enemy.

A Rank Jutsu

Name: Doton: Yomi Numa
Rank: A
ElementEarth
Description: Doton: Yomi Numa is a technique in which, after the necessary finger signs are formed, a swamp is created by the user, in which the enemy is sinking in and can no longer move. Depending on how much chakra the user has spent for it, the opponent is either stuck or sinking in. 1 post is needed for it to work.

S Rank Jutsu

Name: Doton: Kajugan no Jutsu
Rank: S
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu is a earth Jutsu with which the user can turn anything and anyone to stone, provided they are touching the object/person. 2 posts are needed for it to work.


Genjutsu


E/D Rank Jutsu

Name: Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu
Rank: D
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Kasumi Jūsha no Jutsu is a technique in which the user creates false copies of himself which attack the enemy, which seem to consist of an oily substance, and after each hit compose again.

Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu
Rank: D
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu is a technique in which one can create an illusion in which the victim endures his worst fears that his own mind produced.

C Rank Jutsu

Name: Bunshin no Hana
Rank: C
Classification: Genjutsu
Element NA
Requirements: None.
Description: Bunshin no Hana is a Genjutsu, which the user, after having formed the necessary finger sign and an enemy attacks him, can be divided into flowers. These blossoms flutter around the enemy to distract him. While the opponent is busy with the flowers, the user masquerades as a tree or something else, or escapes.

Name: Kori Shinchu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None.
Description: Kori Shinchū no Jutsu is a Genjutsu. The user confuses with this illusion the enemy and leaves them unnoticed always walk the same way until the enemy is exhausted. This technique is difficult to see through.

Name: Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu. The user is deceived with an illusion which covers certain objects or create fake people.

Name: Suzu: Kiri
Rank: C
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Suzu: Kiri is a Genjutsu. It generates an illusionary clone, which then explodes in front of the opponents in a cloud of rose petals.

B Rank Jutsu

Name: Kagami no Ran
Rank: B
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None.
Description: Kagami no Ran is a counter-Genjutsu. After the user has been caught in a Genjutsu, he turns green and suddenly disappears. Then a vine grows over the enemy and then out of the vine a orchid is formed. From this flower rises the user, whose arms are now wrapped with vines and his opponent. In the end the opponent is strangled, of course, everything happens in his head, but the enemy falls in a deep unconsciousness that can be lifted with Kai from another person.

Name: Choshinka
Rank: B
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Chōshinka is one a Genjutsu. After having formed the necessary finger sign, the user disappears and will appear again in the form of countless butterflies. The butterflies surround the enemy who is sinking in the ground. The user then appears again to glue to the sunken enemy’ face an explosive tag and then disappears again. Then the user releases the Genjutsu and the butterflies turn to explosive tags. Then the user activates the explosive tag on the enemy’s face, which will also activate the other tags in a
big explosion

Name: Kagami
Rank: B
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: The user must be caught in a Genjutsu.
Description: Kagami is a Jutsu that can be used if the user is trapped in a Genjutsu. The user enables this technique to escape from the illusion and then attack. After he has turned into countless flowers, those flowers wrap around the opponent and makes him a live through deception, in which he suffocates or dissolves by the flowers. In reality he is only in a deep consciousness, which may be repealed by Kai by another Ninja.

Name: Magen: Anbo
Rank: B
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None.
Description: Magen: Anbo is a Genjutsu. First, the user disappears as in Magen: Jubaku Satsu, then a beanstalk grows under the feet of the opponent and wraps him. Then a pod is created nearby the opponent and out of it the user appears. The user kills the enemy, which happens of course all in the opponent’s his head, but the enemy falls unconscious. It can be lifted by Kai from another Ninja..

Name: Magen: Hana Rasui
Rank: B
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Magen: Hana Rasui is a Genjutsu The user creates with this technique many large lotus flowers around the opponent, while the user stands on one himself. Then on the user’s command, the lotus flowers close and capture the enemy in them until it implodes.The Genjutsu ends and the opponent falls unconscious to the ground.

Name: Magen: Jigoku Goka
Rank: B
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Magen: Jigoku Goka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu in which the user creates an illusion, in which from the sky a huge fireball flies to the opponent and everything seems to catch fire.

Name: Magen: Jubaku Satsu
Rank: B
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Magen: Jubaku Satsu is a Genjutsu. Once the user has formed the necessary finger signs, he disappears from the view of the enemy. Now tendrils sprout from the ground and after a short time the enemy is tied to a tree and unable to move.

Name: Jigyaku no Jutsu
Rank:A
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Jigyaku no Jutsu is a Jutsu that can be used to get from another person information that they do not wish to disclose or which they no longer remember. Once the necessary finger sign is formed, the opponent is put into a trance state. Now the user is able, to turn back time in the victim’s mind, so that he discloses the information.

Name: Kokuangyou no Jutsu
Rank: A
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description:Kokuangyō no Jutsu is a Genjutsu. The senses of the enemy become so deluded that he perceives no light and can’t see the attacks of user.

Name: Magen: Kotan on Anbo
Rank: A
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: Two Ninja.
Description: Magen: Kotan no Anbo is a Genjutsu and the larger version of Magen: Anbo, so at least two Ninja are needed to perform this Jutsu. Once the users have formed the necessary finger signs, not only one beanstalk arises which wraps the enemy, but a whole forest of vines, in which the enemy is firmly locked. Then two pods arise out of which the users appear. In reality the enemy just lies unconscious on the floor. The unconsciousness can be lifted with Kai from another Ninja.

Name: Nehan Shoja no Jutsu
Rank: A
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Nehan Shoja no Jutsu is a technique in which, after the necessary hand seals are formed, countless white feathers appear that fall from the sky, where upon all victims become unconscious. This Genjutsu can be prevented and released with Kai.


Name: Raigenraikouchuo
Rank: A
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: Raigenraikōchū is a Genjutsu in which it looks for the targeted person as if the entire area glows with a bright light. Since the opponent can be blinded by this Jutsu, it’s especially suited for surprise attacks. This is just a Genjutsu, meaning that the bright light doesn’t exist in reality, so the user can attack the target

Name: Konchū no akumu
Rank: C
Classification: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Requirements: The enemy has to look at the casters eyes.
Description:When caught in this Genjutsu the enemy will see different insects crawling out of their body. (mouth, nose or even break out of their skin) The enemy can break free with pain/Kai.

Name: Kami no keimusho
Rank: B
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: The opponent has to have long hair. The opponent has to look at the caster's hair.
Description: The enemy's hair will wrap around his neck, suffocating him. The enemy can break free if he cuts his/her hair.

Name: Ketsueki warai
Rank: B
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
• Requirements: The opponent has to be wounded and has to look at the caster's fingers.
• Description: The enemy's blood will run out of the wound and as a result the enemy will blead to death. In reality he will just faint. The enemy can break free with pain.

Name: Wa kūki
Rank: A
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: The opponent has to look at the caster's upper body.
Description: The enemy will find himself in a place with no air and thus die. In reality he will faint. The enemy can break free with Pain.

Name: Kiken'na jimen
Rank: C
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: The opponent has to look at the caster's arms.
Description: The ground around the enemy will turn into needles which will pierce him. The enemy can break free with pain.

Name:Nemu-sōna oto
Rank: A
Classification: Genjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: The opponent has to look at the caster's head/face.
Description:Inside the enemy's head a sound will appear which will let them fall asleep. The enemy can only break free if another Ninja sents their own chakra into the victim's body.

Clan Jutsu


Name: San Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: C [When fluorine acid is used] B [When aqua regia is used] A[When magic acid is used]
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~ Fluorine acid [C-ranked] Aqua regia [B-ranked] Magic acid [A ranked]
Requirements: Sansei KKG, must be chuunin
Description: San Bunshin no Jutsu is like Kage Bunshin no Jutsu a technique with which one creates a real double of himself, who can think and act independently. This double, when hit seriously, splashes and drops fall towards any direction. So it's basically like a small explosion ranging 1 meter. The C-ranked version of this jutsu causes minor burns, which the victim, however, does not feel because of the acid's numbing effect.

Name: San: Sansei Mizuumi
Rank: C [Fluorine acid] B [Aqua regia] A[Magic acid]
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Fluorine acid, Aqua regia, Magic acid if Jounin
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin ranked
Description: San: Sansei Mizuumi is a acid-Jutsu, with which the user, after having formed the necessary finger sign, spits an acid fluid from the mouth. If the enemy comes into contact with this liquid, his feet are burned. However, if he concentrates his chakra on his feet, he can walk on this acid liquid, without getting burned.The C-ranked version of this jutsu causes minor burns, which the victim, however, does not feel because of the acid's numbing effect

Name: San: Sansei dama
Rank: A[Magic acid]/B[Aqua regia]/C[Fluorine]
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Magic acid/aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Jounin or chuunin
Description: With San: Sansei dama the enemy is locked in a ball of acid. Inside this acid ball the enemy is being 'melted' away, leaving behind black ash [carbon and other pure elements]. To maintain the Jutsu, the user must touch the ball, or a thin acid flow has to be connected with the ball and a part of her body, otherwise the chakra flow is interrupted and thus the Jutsu disperses. The jutsu needs 2 posts so it can work.

Name: San: Sansei funsha
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: San: Sansei funsha is a acid Jutsu. The user fires a strong jet of aqua regia from the mouth.

Name: San: Sansei no chisai boru
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: San:Sansei no chisai boru is a acid-Jutsu, in which the user forges acid in the mouth, and shoots it in the form of balls on the opponent.

Name: Acid whip.
Rank: B
Classification:Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: The acid whip is a jutsu with which a whip is created out of aqua regia. This acid whip can be used to attack or tie enemies. Once the opponent is touched/tied with the whip, the place he got touched 'melts away' leaving behind a hole and black ash on the ground.

Name: San: Sansei Tatsumaki
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: Sansei tatsumaki Jutsu is a Jutsu with which the user creates a tornado of acid around them. This tornado can attack the enemy and protect the user at the same time.

Name: San: Sansei Kozui
Rank: B
Classification:Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: Sansei kozui is a acid-Jutsu, in which the user, after having formed the necessary finger signs, a huge amount of acid comes out of his mouth, flooding the surrounding area and burning the enemies that are inside this area and pretty much everything else, except pure elements. The maximum range is 2 meters.

Name:San: Sansei Supaiku
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: San: Sansei Supaiku is a acid-Jutsu. After the necessary finger signs are shaped, a series of rotating spikes made of acid shoot out of the users body and race toward the enemy.

Name: San:Sansei Baria
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: San: Sansei Baria is a Jutsu that is used for defense. After the user has formed the necessary finger sign, an acid barrier appears to protect him temporarily from attacks. The acid comes out of the user's body.

Name: San: Sansei Nami
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: San: Sansei Nami is an acid-Jutsu. This technique creates a large acid wave that hits the opponent and consequently dissolves them.

Name: San Bunshin Daibakuha
Rank: A
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia, Fluorine, Magic acid
Requirements: San Bunshin, Jounin
Description: San Bunshin is an acid Jutsu. First, the user creates a San Bunshin. This Bunshin sprints with a tremendous speed to the enemy and at the same moment in which the Bunshin has reached the target, the user lets it explode. The opponent's body melts away there where it was hit.

Name: San: Sansei Uzu
Rank: C[Fluorine]/B[Aqua regia]/A[Magic acid]
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Fluorine, Aqua regia, Magic acid
Requirements: Any sword, Sansei KKG.
Description: San: Sansei Uzu is a acid-Jutsu. After having formed the necessary finger sign, a huge amount of acid that turns into a whirlpool is created from the user's mouth. This whirlpool is wrapped around the sword and then the sword is swung at the opponent, resulting in death if it hits. The C-ranked version of this jutsu causes minor burns, which the victim, however, does not feel because of the acid's numbing effect.


Name: San: Sansei
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu.
Element Acid~Fluorine/Aqua regia/Magic acid
Requirements: Sansei KKG, This jutsu is a very basic clan jutsu which can be learned by a genin.
Description: With this jutsu, the clan member is able to draw out the acid of his body and use it however he wishes. Also, if the acid is already outside his body, the user can manipulate it and make it do what he wants. Ex. If the acid is in a lake with water, the user can seperate the acid from the water and pour it out of the water and then use it for a jutsu or something else.


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Name: Hakken no Jutsu
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element N/A
Requirements: None
Description: The user pumps chakra into his nose to significantly increase his smelling capabilities.

This sounds like the Inuzuka technique.

Name: Katon: Goenka
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon: Goenka is a fire-Jutsu. The user jumps and, while in the air, fires three huge balls of fire on the enemy. Then everything ends in a huge explosion.

Please rephrase this. The way it's worded it's far too powerful for a B-rank. Maybe just say it creates a large explosion?
Raiton (Lightning)


C Rank Jutsu


Name: Raiton: Hiraishin
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements: None
Description: Raiton: Hiraishin is a Jutsu in which the user must touch the opponent. The user extends his hand in the air and lightning strike in his body, which he passes on to the enemy, but the user remains unharmed.

Raw lightning strikes you and you're fine? How does this work? It shouldn't be possible for just a B-ranked jutsu. Also, what are the affects of passing it on to the enemy?

S Rank Jutsu

Name: Raiton no Yoroi
Rank: S
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements: None
Description: Raiton no Yoroi is a lightning Jutsu, which consumes a lot of chakra. The user envelops himself in lightning chakra, creating a protective coating of electric energy, extremely weakening or completely neutralizing the opponent's Jutsu and strengthens the user’s Taijutsu and speed dramatically. The higher the Chakra usage is for this Jutsu is, the more lightning it builds up to the user around. Even chidori can only put a small scratch on the user.

Name: Thunder Saber
Rank: S
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements:None
Description: Thunder Saber is a technique that produces a lightning bolt in the user’s hand, which, when it comes into contact with the enemy, explodes.

How big is the saber, and the explosion, and does the explosion effect you?
What are the major drawbacks to both of your techniques?

Doton (Earth)



Name: Doton: Retsudo Tensho
Rank:C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Doton: Retsudo Tensho is an Earth Jutsu, which is used by Iwa Ninja. After the necessary finger signs were formed, the user puts his hand on the ground. Then the ground crashes.

Please elaborate on the effect. Does it split the earth, make it crumble, make it explode?

B Rank Jutsu

Name: Ninpo: Iwa Nadare
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: A mountain.
Description: Ninpo: Iwa Nadare is a technique of Raiga Kurosuki. After having formed the necessary finger sign of breaking rocks on a mountain and throw on the opponent.

The wording is really odd here. So it just throws rocks at people?

Name: Arijigoku no Jutsu
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Arijigoku no Jutsu is a Earth Jutsu. If the enemy finds himself on earth, the user can create a sand hopper. With this the opponents and the surrounding area is potted.

So it turns the surrounding area into a sandpit?



Name: Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi
Rank: A
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi is an Earth Ninjutsu. After the necessary finger signs are formed, over the target a dimension-hole will open from which reddish clay emerges. After the mud has covered the target, it will be enclosed with Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari and heated by Katon: Suyaki no Jutsu so that it hardens and the target remains immobile.
Note: This Jutsu can be only used by ANBU/Kage

Name: Doton: Otoshi buta
Rank: A
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Otoshi buta is an earth Ninjutsu. With it the user opens a dimension-hole from which a huge cover in form of a boar appears and falls on the enemy, imprisoning them.

I have an issue with these two, being that you open up a dimension-hole..

Name: Doton: Yomi Numa
Rank: A
ElementEarth
Description: Doton: Yomi Numa is a technique in which, after the necessary finger signs are formed, a swamp is created by the user, in which the enemy is sinking in and can no longer move. Depending on how much chakra the user has spent for it, the opponent is either stuck or sinking in.

S Rank Jutsu

Name: Doton: Kajugan no Jutsu
Rank: S
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu is a earth Jutsu with which the user can turn anything and anyone to stone, provided they are touching the object/person.

I want a post length that you need to remain in contact with the object/person, maybe a chart according to size and if it's a person or object.


Name: San: Sansei dama
Rank: A[Magic acid]/B[Aqua regia]/C[Fluorine]
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Magic acid/aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Jounin or chuunin
Description: With San: Sansei dama the enemy is locked in a ball of acid. Inside this acid ball the enemy is being 'melted' away, leaving behind black ash [carbon and other pure elements]. To maintain the Jutsu, the user must touch the ball, or a thin acid flow has to be connected with the ball and a part of her body, otherwise the chakra flow is interrupted and thus the Jutsu disperses.

This jutsu needs a charge time, to give them time to get away from it. It can't happen instantly

Name: San: Sansei Kozui
Rank: B
Classification:Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: Sansei kozui is a acid-Jutsu, in which the user, after having formed the necessary finger signs, a huge amount of acid comes out of his mouth, flooding the surrounding area and burning the enemies that are inside this area and pretty much everything else, except pure elements.

Maximum range of the attack?

Name:San: Sansei Supaiku
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: San: Sansei Supaiku is a acid-Jutsu. After the necessary finger signs are shaped, a series of rotating spikes made of acid shoot out of the users body and race toward the enemy.

Name: San:Sansei Baria
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: San: Sansei Baria is a Jutsu that is used for defense. After the user has formed the necessary finger sign, an acid barrier appears to protect him temporarily from attacks. The acid comes out of the user's body.

Name: San: Sansei Nami
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: San: Sansei Nami is an acid-Jutsu. This technique creates a large acid wave that hits the opponent and consequently dissolves them.

Name: San Bunshin Daibakuha
Rank: A
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia, Fluorine, Magic acid
Requirements: San Bunshin, Jounin
Description: San Bunshin is an acid Jutsu. First, the user creates a San Bunshin. This Bunshin sprints with a tremendous speed to the enemy and at the same moment in which the Bunshin has reached the target, the user lets it explode. The opponent, if he is hit, melts to death, leaving behind only black ash.

I'm not sure how I feel about this technique.. But I don't think I can say anything is wrong with it.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeSat 23 Oct 2010, 8:44 pm

Quote :
Quote :
• Name: Hakken no Jutsu
• Rank: C
• Classification: Ninjutsu
• Element N/A
• Requirements: None
• Description: The user pumps chakra into his nose to significantly increase his smelling capabilities.

Deleted.

Quote :
Name: Katon: Goenka
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Fire
Requirements: None
Description: Katon: Goenka is a fire-Jutsu. The user jumps and, while in the air, fires three huge balls of fire on the enemy.

Edited, I deleted the explosion part.

Quote :
• Name: Raiton: Hiraishin
• Rank: B
• Classification: Ninjutsu
• Element Lightning
• Requirements: None
• Description: Raiton: Hiraishin is a Jutsu in which the user must touch the opponent. The user extends his hand in the air and lightning strike in his body, which he passes on to the enemy, but the user remains unharmed.

Well, it's a cannon technique so I don't really know why the user stays unharmed. And the victim would momentarily be stunned; 3-4 seconds.

Quote :
Name: Raiton no Yoroi
Rank: S
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements: None
Description: Raiton no Yoroi is a lightning Jutsu, which consumes a lot of chakra. The user envelops himself in lightning chakra, creating a protective coating of electric energy, extremely weakening or completely neutralizing the opponent's Jutsu and strengthens the user’s Taijutsu and speed dramatically. The higher the Chakra usage is for this Jutsu is, the more lightning it builds up to the user around. Even chidori can only put a small scratch on the user.

Name: Thunder Saber
Rank: S
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Lightning
Requirements:None
Description: Thunder Saber is a technique that produces a lightning bolt in the user’s hand, which, when it comes into contact with the enemy, explodes. The explosion's range is a half meter and the saber is thrown so the user doesn't get affected by it. The hand with which it is thrown is useless for 1 post.

Raiton no Yoroi takes a lot of chakra, let's say 30%?
Thinder saber was edited.

Quote :
Name: Doton: Retsudo Tensho
Rank:C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: None
Description: Doton: Retsudo Tensho is an Earth Jutsu, which is used by Iwa Ninja. After the necessary finger signs were formed, the user puts his hand on the ground. Then the ground splits. (Like Sakura when she's hitting the earth with her fists)

Edited.

Quote :
Name: Ninpo: Iwa Nadare
Rank: B
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Earth
Requirements: A mountain.
Description: Ninpo: Iwa Nadare is a technique of Raiga Kurosuki. After having formed the necessary finger sign, rocks break away from a mountain and fall on the opponent.

Edited the wording, so yeah rocks fall from a mountain on the opponents.

Quote :
• Name: Arijigoku no Jutsu
• Rank: B
• Classification: Ninjutsu
• Element Earth
• Requirements: None
• Description: Arijigoku no Jutsu is a Earth Jutsu. If the enemy finds himself on earth, the user can create a sand hopper. With this the opponents and the surrounding area is potted.

Deleted.

Name: Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi
Rank: A
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi is an Earth Ninjutsu. After the necessary finger signs are formed, over the target a dimension-hole will open from which reddish clay emerges. After the mud has covered the target, it will be enclosed with Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari and heated by Katon: Suyaki no Jutsu so that it hardens and the target remains immobile.
Note: This Jutsu can be only used by ANBU/Kage

Name: Doton: Otoshi buta
Rank: A
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Otoshi buta is an earth Ninjutsu. With it the user opens a dimension-hole from which a huge cover in form of a boar appears and falls on the enemy, imprisoning them.

Deleted.


Quote :
Name: Doton: Yomi Numa
Rank: A
ElementEarth
Description: Doton: Yomi Numa is a technique in which, after the necessary finger signs are formed, a swamp is created by the user, in which the enemy is sinking in and can no longer move. Depending on how much chakra the user has spent for it, the opponent is either stuck or sinking in. 1 post is needed for it to work.

S Rank Jutsu

Name: Doton: Kajugan no Jutsu
Rank: S
Element Earth
Description: Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu is a earth Jutsu with which the user can turn anything and anyone to stone, provided they are touching the object/person. 2 posts are needed for it to work.

Edited.

Quote :
Name: San: Sansei dama
Rank: A[Magic acid]/B[Aqua regia]/C[Fluorine]
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Magic acid/aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Jounin or chuunin
Description: With San: Sansei dama the enemy is locked in a ball of acid. Inside this acid ball the enemy is being 'melted' away, leaving behind black ash [carbon and other pure elements]. To maintain the Jutsu, the user must touch the ball, or a thin acid flow has to be connected with the ball and a part of her body, otherwise the chakra flow is interrupted and thus the Jutsu disperses. The jutsu needs 2 posts so it can work.

Edited.

Quote :
Name: San: Sansei Kozui
Rank: B
Classification:Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
Description: Sansei kozui is a acid-Jutsu, in which the user, after having formed the necessary finger signs, a huge amount of acid comes out of his mouth, flooding the surrounding area and burning the enemies that are inside this area and pretty much everything else, except pure elements. The maximum range is 2 meters.

Edited.

Quote :
Name: San Bunshin Daibakuha
Rank: A
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element Acid~Aqua regia, Fluorine, Magic acid
Requirements: San Bunshin, Jounin
Description: San Bunshin is an acid Jutsu. First, the user creates a San Bunshin. This Bunshin sprints with a tremendous speed to the enemy and at the same moment in which the Bunshin has reached the target, the user lets it explode. The opponent's body melts away there where it was hit

Edited.

Uff, quite a lot. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeSat 23 Oct 2010, 8:54 pm

Alrighty, then, I suppose I have no more issues. I can comfortably approve this.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeTue 14 Feb 2012, 10:52 pm

Deleted Kaze's approval because i don't think he even read anything.

Why is Acid a skill specialty?
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeTue 14 Feb 2012, 11:28 pm

Makes more sense as an Elemental combination. Well, and as proven by canon, it matches the boil release: Fire and Water Combo.

But I suppose, if you generate the acid through a metabolic structure, and the result of altered dna (kekkei genkai), then it fits the bill. But it still doesn't need to be a specialty, being that the techniques used in conjunction with it, are ninjutsu. If anything, it may be considered a special characteristic, if you've profound control over it.

It could be either of the above, but you've got down for it, doesn't quite make sense.

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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeTue 14 Feb 2012, 11:39 pm

It need to be an element because of what it is. That acid cant simply come from her body, it has to be created with chakra somehow. I highly doubt her body can carry such large amounts of acid around, and if it does, that would severely limit her on how much of that acid can be used till she's out. And i don't see any limits. It being created from her chakra would make more sense, making it an element.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeWed 15 Feb 2012, 2:55 am

Well, if a limit were added, a kekkei genkai could just as easily fit the bill. Altered genetics could account for both the creation of the acid, and her tolerance to it. Yes, it would still need to be controlled with chakra after it leaves whatever in her body that produces it, so I see your point there. Examining the app though, this would be an easier route to take, rather then converting it to an elemental technique, due to the fact that she lack's water. Adding more restrictions to the acid in order to class it as a kekkei genkai would be a simpler path then removing earth or lightning in their entirety, and revamping her jutsu list.

But arguing about it here is counter productive.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeWed 15 Feb 2012, 8:02 am

Mm, I took the acid out from the Skill Specialties.

Well, because of all these tests she has gone through, she can create the acid inside her body and it doesn't kill her because well...it's her own. Just like the bugs from the Aburame clan don't eat the bodies of the clan members, the acid does not destroy Ralia's body. And yeah, chakra is needed to control the acid once it leaves her body, I thought that was obvious..^^". Sorry.

And it's not an element, it's a KKG. Like, the Kaguya or Uchiha's.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeWed 15 Feb 2012, 2:25 pm

Fair enough. It still does need a limit to how much you can create, or how much you hold, or rather the rate and which you produce it. The aburame store a supernatural number of bugs in their body. As far as a liquid goes though, I can't see someone storing more then their own fluidic volume of acid.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeWed 15 Feb 2012, 3:40 pm

Well yeah, you're right about the need for limitation. How about this;

Genin can use the KKG 4 times and it has a 4 post cooldown ( universal )

Chuunin can use the KKG 8 times and it has a 6 post cooldown ( universal )

Jounin/S Rank can use the KKG 12 times and it has an 8 post cooldown ( universal )
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeWed 15 Feb 2012, 4:02 pm

Is that twelve times, and then an eight post cool down?

Or twelve times per thread, with an eight post cooldown between each time?

Either one sounds legit to me. But you may want to clarify.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeThu 16 Feb 2012, 7:46 am

It's twelve times and then an eight post cooldown. After these eight posts, she can use it twelve times more and then again an eight post cooldown and so on and so forth. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeThu 16 Feb 2012, 9:24 am

Shouldn't this all depend on how much acid the ability that you're trying to use, uses? After viewing a few Jutsu for it, i don;t think it's going to be possible for it to just be a thing with your KKG, and not an element.

This jutsu being an example:

• Name: San: Sansei Kozui
• Rank: B
• Classification:Ninjutsu
• Element Acid~Aqua regia/fluorine
• Requirements: Sansei KKG, Chuunin
• Description: Sansei kozui is a acid-Jutsu, in which the user, after having formed the necessary finger signs, a huge amount of acid comes out of his mouth, flooding the surrounding area and burning the enemies that are inside this area and pretty much everything else, except pure elements. The maximum range is 2 meters.

As well as multiple other techniques, such as Sansei Tatsumaki. Not to mention, you can create acid clones as well.

If the Kekkei Genkai worked in a way where you cant literally use acid in the way of an element, but you're capable of using it to taint your Jutsu somehow (With 2 energy based techniques, and earth, i doubt this would even work) Then it'd possibly work. But the way you have it set up, is you basically have a compartment inside of you that's capable of holding a supernatural amount of acid, based on the descriptions on what you're capable of doing with it.

All i can think of is to redesign your elements. If i knew of a better way to go about helping with it, I'd say so, but I'm not to good in that area. Masa would probably be better for that.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeSat 18 Feb 2012, 9:10 am

You mean like, adding Water to my elements and taking out, let's say, Fire?

This is my other account, btw.

And the jutsu you mention above has a range limit. It spreads just two meters.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeSat 18 Feb 2012, 1:14 pm

I think she understands the range, but two cubic meters is still quite a bit of acid, more so then a human body could store. You'll need to add more description to your acid techniques, and include such sayings as: "using chakra to control and expand the acid from within her bodily reserves." You'll also need to a fix a certain measurement to how much acid you can have stored at a single time, and how much, through the expansion and additional creation, you can use at one time.

That's all for if you want to keep it a KKG.

Now if you want to go the route of making it an advanced element (elemental combination), as Revy suggests (both her and my methods will work, it simply depends on the route of work you want to go through), removing fire in place of water won't work. As per canon Naruto, the Boil release (misleading, most people think it's steam, but it's most certainly an acidic release) is used by combining fire and water (once again, you'd think that'd be steam... what croc) to make acid. It can even be used to create acidic vapours (SUPER COOL!). But it will require you either swapping your earth or lightning element for water, and losing whichever one you don't choose. We're all limited to three elements, so to have an advanced element, or elemental combination, you'll have to narrow down to the two components, and the advanced element itself.

Hence why I suggest keeping it as a KKG.
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeSat 18 Feb 2012, 9:40 pm

Masahiro Yukina wrote:
You'll also need to a fix a certain measurement to how much acid you can have stored at a single time, and how much, through the expansion and additional creation, you can use at one time.

Em, then, how about Genin can use 3 Jutsu in one topic (According to their rank of course, which means only C ranked jutsu)

Chuunin 6 jutsu, again according to their rank, so C-B ranked jutsu.

Jounin/S 9 jutsu, again according to their rank which means C-A.

Would this cover what's in the quote?
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PostSubject: Re: Sansei, Ralia [Jounin]   Sansei, Ralia [Jounin] Icon_minitimeSat 18 Feb 2012, 9:42 pm

That still doesn't really change the fact that the amount of acid you use depends on what Jutsu is used. The only way to have enough of that acid to supply those Jutsu is to have the acid element, basically, expanding the acid using your chakra.
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