Poetry by Zane

Subject: Poetry by Zane Wed 05 May 2010, 9:24 pm

Trust and Loyalty

What is Loyalty?
Is it to be loyal to someone?
Without conditions?
Or is it something to be with no one?
And have nothing to your own munition?
What to say If I am loyal?
And yet not noticed of being of such?
What am I to be not noticed by someone to be Loyal to?
I am a nobody if I am not Recognized as loyal.
I am a no one, as a Royal.

As for Trust.
Is it lust?
No it is not.
It only Rots you.
Trust is for fools.
Fools who can't find people to trust.
You can only muster the amount of hate.
Until it melts you with your muster of limits.
Don't trust anyone, unless they trust you.
I, can't trust anyone anymore.
I'm not, understood.

Subject: Re: Poetry by Zane Wed 05 May 2010, 9:45 pm

...cool

Subject: Re: Poetry by Zane Thu 06 May 2010, 5:14 pm

Betrayal and Dishonesty

I doubt a soul cares,
If I am betrayed,
By someone who I care,
And pledge my Loyalty to.
What is a Mare,
Without it's Rider?
What is a Spider,
Without it's Web?
It's all been a Lie.
No one knows what Loyalty is anymore.
It is all nothing but Betrayal.

Am I dishonest when I say I am Loyal?
No.
Am I dishonest when I say I am Royal?
No.
Is anyone else Honest when they say things?
No.
Why should I trust you?
You only break my trust.
You only Muster what you can.
And leave the Moment you tan.
All brown and nice,
But all that skin,
Doesn't know the evil in your heart.
Was it this intention all along?
To betray me at first will?
I am nothing anymore.
No one understands.

Subject: Re: Poetry by Zane Thu 06 May 2010, 5:28 pm

...cool

Subject: Re: Poetry by Zane Thu 06 May 2010, 9:49 pm

Opinions..?

Subject: Re: Poetry by Zane Fri 07 May 2010, 12:08 am

Nice poem Zane :)) although a little comment, the subjects is a bit lonely lol!

Subject: Re: Poetry by Zane Fri 07 May 2010, 2:32 pm

thanks..I guess...

Subject: Re: Poetry by Zane Fri 07 May 2010, 6:08 pm

Loneliness

What is Loneliness without people to feel lovely without?
What is it when you can walk up and say whatever?
I'm not like that at all, I am a shy person,
I'm not Outgoing or all Preppy Snots,
I'm not a person like that,
I'm me, and Me alone.
But, I still feel this emptiness inside.
Why? Why do I feel so empty?
It's like there's a hole in my heart.
That I can't fill.

Subject: Re: Poetry by Zane Fri 07 May 2010, 11:45 pm

What is Life?

What is Life when it comes to heartbreak?
Can I trust anyone that comes to tear?
Someone who comes to Rake your heart out?
Give me reasons to trust you.
You never talk to my anymore.
You never even consider clicking that one button,
Give me a reason to talk to you.
I want to know...
Please give me a reason...