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~General Information~

Name: Hybris Kinkotsu Toukestu no Kaguya

Nickname/Alias: The Scarlet

Weight: 46.4kg? (Changeable by Hybris)

Height: 5' 8"

Age: 26

Gender: Female

Appearance: Compensated Revamp. Permission! Hyb

Clothing: Hybris stands five feet eight inches tall, weighing approximately fourty-six kilograms. Her build is rather athletic and she has good muscle tone that covers her body and slims her curves to the fullest extent. She works hard to keep that slim appearance, allowing her to be quick on her feet and yet a very strong hand-to-hand combatant when needed. It also hides her strength well, giving her quote the advantage when needed. She wears a tight black upper body piece of clothing. It is a long sleeved full neck piece, being able to pull it up over her head hiding her hair within it and when wearing a mask, that she often does, she can hide her appearance completely. She wears loose fitting black pants that seem harshly formal. On top of the tight uppder body piece, she wears the formal kimono that is a dark navy blue color. She wears black gloves over her hands and black boots to match.

She has several scars among her back, mostly her chest, back from the fights she has gotten herself into. But along those memorable scars she has memorable tattoos that fit her life style. She has several, the largest on her back, being the first tattoo that she recieved. She earned it shortly after joining the ANBU squad of the Stone Village, while staying in the capital of that country. The tattoo, roughly translated, is the kanji symbol for Death. Symbolizing her past, present and future. After that tattoo when she had stayed in the Land of Fang, she earned two more tattoo's. They reside on the back of both of her hands. On the back of the right hand, is the kanji symbol for assassination, and on the back of the left - Sin. Her final tattoo is on the back of her neck, the tattoo has much more meaning than the others, and is actually believed to be a cursed mark by those who have seen it, recognizing it as the Cursed Seal of Earth. She keeps that hidden at all times.

She wears a protective mesh underneath all of her clothing on her chest to hide it well. The mesh, is made of condensed steel, rendering taijutsu practically useless, but is condensed for light-weight movement. She keeps her main pouch filled with kunai, shuriken, and soldier pills on her left leg. Her second largest pouch, is on her right leg, containing multiple weapon summoning scrolls, but it more-or-less favors her right butt-cheek. These are kept secure to her body for the majority of the time, she also keeps them shut securely, even during fights, to avoid anyone being able to pick her pockets so to speak.

Personality: Hybris now appears to be indifferent, caring only for a few things around her. She spends a considerable amount of time practicing her perfect art of the Silent Killing Homocide technique, which requires absolute mastery of the Ninjutsu art. Kimimaro, a "father" of hers, claims that Hybris is a prodigy at the art of murder, as she has a habit of chopping off her victim's limbs or torturing them to the point where they want to suffer in an eternity of misery and pain, rather than escape and live. This shows the darker side to Xarias` personality, and a sign of things to come.

Hybris completely understands the meaning of life, and how close the bridge to death is. However, the matter is simply if her targets and enemies choose to walk across it. Currently, she has no moral value or qualms to her actions, and she will always repeat multiple things such as. "I know what death is like, and I have come to value life, the question is however.. Do you.." She believes that if every human on the planet wishes to truly respect the gift that God has given them, that their innocence and true person be tested in order to survive. If they evidentally escape the trap after doing what was needed, she will acknowledge them among the few who truly value life, those who fail however - She believes deserve to die.

~Clan Information~

Clan Name: Kinkotsu Touketsu no Kaguya

Kekkei Genkai: The Kaguya clan hailed from Hidden Mist and they were known for their love of battle. They foolishly decided to challenge their home country and they were all wiped out save for Kimimaro. This clan has the ability to manipulate their bone structure, this ability is called Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways). They can remove their bones at will to create weapons as strong as steel and also use their abilty to spurn the creation of new bones. However, the new leader of the clan, Hybris - Discovered a newly found trait. She can manipulate the blood cells, skin, and muscles inside of her body as well.

After finding out a new and explicit way to fuse a newly found element, Chill Release, with the her own evolved clans kekkei genkai, she has created a new type of bone release for the primitive Shikotsumyaku techniques. She can now engulf her own body, or her own bones with the freezing Chill Release gas, giving them a shattered and blue hue to them, as well as making her body incredibly cold. These bones can be used to puncture faster, freeze an enemy upon contact, and move more swiftly thanks to molecules being shifted in position as the gas takes its toll upon them. Of course, causing some bones to break on forceful contact, shards will be exerted as well, puncturing and piercing the enemy that dares be in the wake unto this jutsu.

Clan Symbol: They usually have two royalty symboled dots somewhere on their body.

Clan History: The Kaguya clan hailed from Hidden Mist and they were known for their love of battle. They foolishly decided to challenge their home country and they were all wiped out save for Kimimaro, and his daughter, Hybris.

Ability Summary: More advanced version of Shikotsumyaku.

~Rank/Village Information~

Classification: Akatsuki

Letter Rank: X

Village: Mizugakure

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty: Main: Ninjutsu - Sub: Taijutsu - Sub: Weaponry

Elemental Affinity: Everignito (Is extremely hot flames), Everice (Almost indestructable ice with an amazingly cold temperature)

Combined: Chill Release: (a gas that has a potential -10 - +30 degree temperature. the gas does not have a solidified physical appearance, and has a lightened blue hue to it. it can only be felt.)

Special Characteristics: Mastery of Kinkotsu no Shikotsumyaku, Curse Seal, Large chakra reserves, Near Mach 2 Spd. during taijutsu combat, Incredibly skilled in both Ninjutsu/Taijutsu, Special Ice/Flame techniques.

~Jutsu~
Link to all mastered natural Kaguya abilities:
http://naruto.wikia.com/index.php?title=Special:BrowseData/Jutsu&Uses_kekkei_genkai=Shikotsumyaku

Name: Echoing Mist Technique
Rank: C
Element: Mist
Description: Hybris will simply activate this jutsu after her Mist Technique envelops an area. By the use of this jutsu, it allows Hybris to make the mist play somewhat of an 'illusion' on the enemy, making them hear random noises that consist of running, walking, and even Hybris` very own voice, seeming to lull them into a deep state of anticipation, driving them mad.

Name: Optical Derangement Mist Technique
Rank: C
Element: Mist
Description: Hybris will simply activate this jutsu after her Mist Technique envelops an area. By the use of this jutsu, it allows Hybris to make the mist play an accurately powerful optical illusion on the foes that are trapped inside, making them see images of Hybris` running at them, and even multiple images of Hybris will be displayed. However, when the image is struck by an enemy, it will simply disappear, and another image will attempt a strike. In addition, if the image just so happens to land a successful attack, and it hits the opponent - The mist around them will sharpen, increasing the attacks impact.

Name: Chill Release: Hidden Mist of Frozen Wrath
Rank: A
Element: Chill
Description: During the activation of the Hidden Mist Technique, Hybris well exert a -30 degree chilling weather coolant into the mist itself, further densifying it as well as thickening its color. The temperature will drop to hypothermic freezing levels, reducing the chance to survive by lowering the heart rate, brain function, and producing the constant lack of oxygen.

Name: Chill Release: Passive Ability
Rank: C
Element: Chill
Description: Due to extreme weather training over the years as well as practicing her combat skills while in these freezing temperatures. As a result, she has developed normal breathing procedure as well as natural movement and core heating, making sure her own personal body temperature does not drop, and her moving cannot be restrained due to the cold temperature.

Name: Mist Ignious
Rank: S
Element: -
Description: Hybris will release a powerful and deadly toxin into the mist that surrounds her and any enemies present. The toxin DOES NOT effect Hybris whatsoever, but however - If breathed in by the opponent (who would be unaware of the toxin, might I add since this jutsu is done without handsigns or movement), they will be rooted in place due to the inhalation of toxic gas. Then - The second stage of the Ignious puts an extremely lethal flamable substance into the mist which makes the mist resemble that of an A-Bomb if everignito flame touches it. Luckily, if Hybris were ever to be caught in the explosion, she would quickly use her speed and Kinkotsu abilities to get out the area in less then a split second.

Name: Jinsoku Hone Senpuu (Rapid Bone Whirlwind)
Rank: C
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: Involving a high speed dancing motion, and hardly imitating a Rock-Lee like whirlwind attack, Hybris will spin on her hands in circles, while bones shoot out of her body, sending piercing bullets in every direction doing a somewhat large amount of damage. Although the technique is powerful, it also bears a burden. The longer Hybris spins, the more heavy her entire body comes - making it harder to move and continue her jutsu, even after the ability is finished. After she is done; over time she will regain her speed as it was before.

~ All Hybris` Abilities:
Name: Kichigai Gaikotsu Kuro no Jutsu (Disgruntled Skeletal Clone Jutsu)
Rank: C
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: Using the Shikotsu Myaku Kekkei Genkai ability, Hybris has discovered a new form of her bone technique. She quickly performs the needed handsigns to use disposed or broken bones inside of her body to make lesser bone-like skeleton clones. These clones hit extremely hard, but are very poor in their defensive abilities.

Name: Corpse Bone Pathways - Tsume of Shukketsu - (Claw of Bleeding; Claw of Laceration)
Rank: C
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: Using her Corpse Bone Pathways ability, Hybris will allow claws to retract from her knuckles. These claws are razor sharp, and pointed on all sides. Once Hybris has cut the opponent, they will extend and drill deeper inside the enemies body ripping vital organs on the inside.

Name: Hitoshirenu Ansatsu Tekkunikku (Unseen Assassination Technique)
Rank: A
Element: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Description: During the Hidden Mist Technique, Hybris will completely extract the human and matter that makes up her body and make it unseen by any eye. Her atoms will completely break down into a smaller size than molecular potentiality, making her completely invisible and unseen. She will also become completely unhearable. Since these potential needs for combat have been extinguished from the enemy during the activation of this jutsu; this makes it one of the most effective assassination techniques ever created.

Name: Chill Release: Abode of Cold - Frozen Corpse Bone Release Jutsu's
Rank: A
Element: Chill
Clan: Kinkotsu no Kaguya
Description: After finding out a new and explicit way to fuse a newly found element, Chill Release, with the her own evolved clans kekkei genkai, she has created a new type of bone release for the primitive Shikotsumyaku techniques. She can now engulf her own body, or her own bones with the freezing Chill Release gas, giving them a shattered and blue hue to them, as well as making her body incredibly cold. These bones can be used to puncture faster, freeze an enemy upon contact, and move more swiftly thanks to molecules being shifted in position as the gas takes its toll upon them. Of course, causing some bones to break on forceful contact, shards will be exerted as well, puncturing and piercing the enemy that dares be in the wake unto this jutsu.

Name: Water Style: Water Vortex Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: The user makes a vortex made of water, surrounding the foe. Anything within its grasp, it will pull under. It rises up and can also surround the foe, trapping him/her in a barrier.

Name: Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, causing anyone within it to lose the advantage of sight. Then the user attacks while the opponent is helpless.

Name: Water Clone Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Water
Description: Creates one or more identical copies of the user out of water. these clones are capable of attacking.

Name: Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: After a series of handsigns, they user makes a dragon made of water. It is very tall and strikes out of its own will.

Name: Corpse Bone Pathways - Last Stand
Rank: -
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: Hybris will take the curse seal to its highest limit, transacting her bloodstream, with pure calcium - The seal then draws markings from her chest, to cover her entire body. Her eyes become red, and she is filled with pure hate and anger, driven by those two sole emotions. The curse seal helps her gain top speed, around the speed of light - Her skin will slowly begin to turn into nothing but a bone-like exoskeleton, making her a lethal steel weaving opponent. She will gain massive strength, and agility. The downside is; the longer this form is with-held, the lower her full life-expectancy shortens. Overall, the form may only reach its full potential until the enemy she has chosens blood is dranken - She will then begin to recover, turning back to normal. If the enemy is not killed by the transformations deadline; Hybris will be killed instantly.

Name: Muon Satsujin Jutsu (Silent Homocide Technique)
Rank: -
Element: -
Description: Hybris has mastered this art.

Name: Hekirekite no Jutsu- (Thunder Hands Technique)
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: A ninjutsu in which the user focuses the chakra in his hands so that they can create an electric shock able to give a sufficient shock to cause the heart to start beating again in case it stopped.

Name: Dai Endan - Great Fireball
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.

Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu - Grand Waterfall Technique
Rank: A
Element: Water
Description: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Name: Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank: -
Element: Water
Description: Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.

Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Jutsu no Kiri Ryokou (Jutsu of Mist Travel)
Rank: A
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: After Hybris emits her mist jutsu, or is already surrounded by mist - She can then quickly disintigrate her body into the mist, dissapearing completely. Or so it seems. She is actually just swiftly jumping through the mist, but so quickly it cant be seen by the keenest human eye. Once concealed, she will be submerged, and unnoticable by the opponent. She will then strike from above, below, or behind to assassinate her target(s) quickly and clean.

Name: Kago Gaikotsu Joumae (Caged Skeletal Lock)
Rank: B
Element: Shikotsumyaku
Description: By performing the handsigns needed, Hybris disposes of bones in her body to create an enclosed area around her, covering the sides, front, bottom, and top, each bone wall to be about half an inch apart, allowing her to breathe. The bones are as hard as steel - As for making this technique nearly impenetrable, although there is a downside. The longer she keeps the wall up, the more immense amounts of chakra are used to keep said wall up.

Name: Summoning Jutsu: Chi Leech
Rank: S
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will disperse a small, palm-sized leech, which immediatly travels through the mist, or ground around her. The leech is an auto-lock on summon, which will attach to the opponent in an instant. This will suck the chakra out of the enemy(s) and transfer it to Hybris. The only way to successfully kill the leeches are to expose them to severely brutal heat.

Chi Leech - Hidden Ability: Once hit, or killed - The leech will multiply into 4 of itself. If one of the four are attacked, they will multiply into 4 as well; And so on and so forth.

Chi Leech Full Passive Ability: If the leeches are not completely killed within the time limit of 3 posts, the user will be completely drained of his/her chakra. Her pupil color will also turn into a blood red, glowing with a red-black aura.

Name: Kunai' Oite Sono Kiri (Kunai in the Mist)
Rank: B
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will use Hidden Mist Technique in conjuction with the throw of a kunai coated with her swords diseased properties, into the mist at will. Once the kunai enters the mist it will dissipate and dissapear, turning into the mist itself. While the kunai is in the mist, the enemy falls prey to Hybris` will to quickly send the kunai in their direction. This goes great with Hybris` ability to sense movements and vibrations when surrounded by mist. If the kunai pierces the enemy, they will be injected by a cancerous virus which will poison them, and eat there body from the inside out.

Name: Shuriken' Oite Sono Kiri (Shuriken in the Mist)
Rank: B
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will use Hidden Mist Technique in conjuction with the throw of a shuriken coated with her swords diseased properties, into the mist at will. Once the shuriken enters the mist it will dissipate and dissapear, turning into the mist itself. While the shuriken is in the mist, the enemy falls prey to Hybris` will to quickly send the shuriken in their direction. This goes great with Hybris` ability to sense movements and vibrations when surrounded by mist. If the shuriken pierces the enemy, they will be injected by a cancerous virus which will poison them, and eat there body from the inside out.

Name: Shurikunai Danmaku Kara Sono Kiri (Shuriken and Kunai Barrage from the Mist)
Rank: A
Element: Supplementary, Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will throw a scroll into the mist which will dissapear and form into the mist itself. Once the scroll has been enveloped by the mist, it will create hundreds of kunai and shuriken. The projectiles will be consumed by the mist, and dissapear completely. Hybris is capable of with-holding the jutsu due to her massive amount of chakra. She can do this, even when in the heat of battle. Once the opponent(s) are surrounded by mist, they will fall prey to Hybris` will to immediately disperse of the illusion and the kunai/shuriken will appear from the mist, heading in the direction of her enemy(ies). If the opponent(s) are struck by the shuriken or kunai they will be injected with a cancerous virus. Since there are so many projectiles at once this will increase the cancers effect massively. This virus burns the enemies insides, and rots there organs.

Name: Hybris' 7 sword weapon
Her sword: Calamity's Grasp.

Sword Description: The sword is completely made of ice. It is completely indestructable though, so it
cannot break. The ice shards extend into sharp points, capable of slicing and impaling targets easily,
puncturing them. A shard, found in the guard of the blade, glows along with Hybris' emotions. When it
is blue, she is calm and sirine. When it is red, she is angry and blood-hungry. The blade is as long as
Momochi Zabuza's. Since it is created by an element known as Everice, it is extremely heavy to
everyone but the true owner (Hybris). The sword is capable of releasing deadly toxins Hybris likes to
call, diseases.

Sword Length: As big as Zabuza Momochi's.
Sword Weight: If held by Hybris, its weight is merely a few ounces. If by anyone else, its over 30
pounds.

Sword Ability #1: Mist Style; Kusari of Aisu (Chains of Ice)
Effect: Once "Hidden Mist Jutsu" has been used, the sword released a diseased ice toxin into the air
that effects the area inflicted by Hidden Mist. Once the disease affects the target selected, it will
shackle them reducing their movement speed.
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Sword Ability #2: Mist Style; Shimo Netsu (Frost Fever)
Effect: Once the target is impaled, or is touched by the sword he/she will be inflicted with Frost Fever.
It will slow their attack speed, and slowly do ice diseased damage to them.
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Sword Ability #3: Mist Style; Keiro of Shimo (Path of Frost)
Effect: Allows Hybris to make the temperatures in the midst of Hidden Mist Jutsu to negative stature, that ranks almost 4x as low as freezing point.
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Sword Ability #4: Shadow style; Zokunen Shusseki (Unholy Presence)
Effect: Increases Hybris` attack, and movement speed by a very great amount.
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Sword Ability #5: Mist style; Ninmu of Sono Touketsu Ouza (Task of the Frozen Throne)
Effect: Near death, Hybris will impale the ground with the point of her sword, releasing a more
powerful type of a combination disease of Frost Fever, and Chains of Ice. It will root all enemies in
place, by having ice form from the mist surrounding them, keeping them in the ground. Unable to
defend themselves, or move, Hybris will activate her swords hidden ability: "Calamity's Grasp". It will
impale the targets with millions of ice shards in an instant, tearing the bodies to shreds.

~History/RP Sample~

History/Background Story:
Birthing Arc: Hybris was born of the mother from the hailed Kaguya clan. The leader, Kimimaro, abandoned his position in the Mist Village after the brutal ongoing war between the Kaguya and Kirigakure. Leaving his daughter, Hybris, behind. Hybris was forced to live and grow up on her own.

Academy Student-Like Arc: By the age of 8, Hybris became a genious and incredibly powerful inheritor of the Shikotsumyaku bloodline technique, known as the Bone Manipulation or Corpse Bone Pathways Technique. She was able to take down people without seeing them, hearing them, or even knowing if they were there. She used this in conjuction to help her survive during tough times when it snowed incredibly hard and rained in Kirigakure. After the Hunter-Nin and Mist ANBU tracked her down however, she went on the run for her life.

Genin-Like Arc: By the age of 12, she had successfully and completely eluded the Mist ANBU and Hunter-Nin, escaping to the forests of Konoha. She lived rather primitively, but it was a suitable life for an abandoned runaway child ninja. She had already completely mastered the Bloodline technique, Shikotsumyaku. Taking on a new name, Heaven, she underwent explicit training in the village of Konoha. Simply devising the plan to become a Chuunin and further benefit herself, she used many people in 'friendships' and 'quarter-allies' to gain what she wanted. Once obtained, she murdered them. As the Chuunin exams came up, she only had a single foe whose name was Jebiza. She defeated him easily, and passed the exam with noone else being capable of showing up, due to the fact that Hybris had previously murdered them.

Chuunin Arc: Now a Chuunin, Hybris underwent a convincing disguise, traveling back to the Mist Village. In the midst of arriving back at the misty pines and flourishing creatures, she did battle with the Missing-Ninja, Zabuza Momochi. She defeated him, as well as almost murdering the Hunter-Nin Haku for interfereing with their battle. Zabuza offered Hybris a position in the Seven Legendary Swordsman. After taking his offering, Zabuza shortly died after at the hands of a street boss's thugs. Thus, defeating many ninja and enemies over the short months, Hybris quickly rose in ranks. Soon enough, at the mere age of 15, she became the leader of the Seven Legendary Swordsman of the Mist. In disbelief of the prossibility that he would be commanded by a mere child, Kisame Hoshigake engaged in battle with Hybris. After a long and grueling battle with the Akatsuki member, Hybris evidentally turned out on top due to her extreme physical performance and tactical genious. Kisame was poisoned extremely badly due to the injuries he sustained from Hybris` sword, Calamity's Grasp. Unexpectedly, however, Hybris ran into the Mizukage who was quite surprisingly, unknown of whom Hybris was. Hybris used this to her advantage and got the Mizukage, Utashi, to teach her the Lightning affinity, Lightning Palm Jutsu, and one of the most powerful lightning releases, Chidori. Once the training was complete, she decided to leave the Mizukage alone due to the fact that she didnt need any more pressure at the current moment in time. Then, one night while she was asleep - An unexpected visitor came to her house. His name was Daedalus, the Puppet Master. He came to invite her into the Akatsuki due to the leader, Zodiark's, request. She accepted his plea and went on a hunting spree for a ninja named Saishoku Willow. Hybris did intense combat with the diseased and cancerous nin, and came out on top - Assassinating him. Although this was merely a test, as Daedalus explained, Hybris was not amused and engaged in severely brutal combat with the puppet master. Doing extreme damage to him, Daedalus surrended in hopes to stop the madness. She left the premises while Daedalus was basically dismembered in all senses of the word on the floor of a random snow-trenched house that Saishoku was defeated in. She returned to Konoha, and assumed her former disguised nickname, Heaven.

Lead 7LS/Jounin Arc: Over the few 2-3 years, Hybris resided in Konoha - The Leaf Village. The Hokage, Naruto, awarded her for her valiance in brave actions and piercing necesity with the title of becoming an official Konoha Jounin. Still, the leader of the Swordsman, Hybris had been late to many missions and meetings due to the commotion of living both lives. She abandoned the Swordsman due to lack of productivity and conduct, and assumed her rightful position as a normal ninja of Konoha, no longer using the name Heaven - She used her normal name, Hybris Kaguya. The Hokage recognized the potential and desires Hybris had and had forgiven her for her mishaps and sins. In the midst of living in Konoha, Hybris went under a strict combatant training utilized by her. She quickly attained to all natural and elemental aspects of life. Now, Hybris is the sole possessor of the one true inner power, the clan she hailed from was not able to discover. She has altered the Kaguya's Shikotsumyaku clans biogenetic code, to create - Kinkotsu no Kaguya. A clan with the ability to manipulate blood cells, skin cells, and and muscle development. Since then Hybris hasn't seen or heard from any living remnant of the Kaguya clan minus two members; who are now dead as well.

Roleplay Sample: As a RP sample, use the history of Shingai Akumu.


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Akira Amizaru
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeSun 06 Dec 2009, 10:57 pm

Whatever. <<

Don't G-mod with it, and your fine.

-Half Approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeSun 06 Dec 2009, 11:30 pm

Approved.

Im only approving the ice, because i have seen none Bloodline users use the Hyouton element.
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeMon 07 Dec 2009, 12:06 am

Unapproved, until i see some fixes -.-

Sannin is not a rank you can start as, revamp or not.

Chill Release, to OP, and i don;t ever remembering the old Hybris with this

Mach speed was banned, by yourself, get rid of it.

Never Ending Mist ability, remove it, OP

Remove the Lightning Jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeMon 07 Dec 2009, 12:47 am

fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeMon 07 Dec 2009, 12:55 am

Ok, you have my approval
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeMon 07 Dec 2009, 7:05 am

Name: Summoning Jutsu: Chi Leech
Rank: S
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: Hybris will disperse a small, palm-sized leech, which immediatly travels through the mist, or ground around her. The leech is an auto-lock on summon, which will attach to the opponent in an instant. This will suck the chakra out of the enemy(s) and transfer it to Hybris. The only way to successfully kill the leeches are to expose them to severely brutal heat.

Chi Leech - Hidden Ability: Once hit, or killed - The leech will multiply into 4 of itself. If one of the four are attacked, they will multiply into 4 as well; And so on and so forth.

Chi Leech Full Passive Ability: If the leeches are not completely killed within the time limit of 3 posts, the user will be completely drained of his/her chakra. Her pupil color will also turn into a blood red, glowing with a red-black aura.

This jutsu is contradictive because if its killed, how can it multiply? Unless I'm missing something, this is a catch twenty two jutsu for the opposition and I'd say remove it.
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeMon 07 Dec 2009, 7:27 am

That was talked about and decided upon in the past by several admins, back when it was made last year.

It was approved. They said I could only use it in an extremely stressed situation though, like if there was no other choice.
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeMon 07 Dec 2009, 7:39 am

I just question if there is any actual way to kill the leaches, wouldn't it make more sense if the multiplying was only when tried to kill in a different manner than fire and have fire as the only way of absolute death?
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeMon 07 Dec 2009, 10:01 am

Fire, Thunder, Acid, Poison ETC

Anything that doesn't do blunt, or slashing damage will kill them. Or, if you continuously kill them giving them no room to multiple, like smashing them all under a giant land slide, or a large piece of earth
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PostSubject: Re: Compensated Revamp. Permission!   Compensated Revamp. Permission! Icon_minitimeFri 25 Dec 2009, 1:01 am

i know im not a mod or anything, (well my other character is) but isnt chill a bodily reaction? and ice is from the clan that haku is from? so she cant have two at the same time. she also says that she can read minds and all her elements are are the hottest fire and the coldest ice. which is too op in my opinion. we dont want xiarias to go completely op like last time and destroyed the entire sand/rock village whatever with a genkai that never existed. she had those things approved but she didnt have an app to back it up that she couldnt have it.
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